Persuasive writing

 Hey bloggers.

This is my persuasive writing.

My opinion was get 2 toys you can find out why when you read it. Oh good it shows up well this time.

Bye bloggers. 

Chromebook information report

 Hey bloggers

I have another information report this time it is about chromebooks

I know it's hard to read again but it's the chromebook's fault not mine I should have included that fact in my information report well it's here 

Bye bloggers hope you enjoyed the information report if you were able to read it.

My shark information report

 Hi bloggers

This is my information report on sharks.

You can see it below:

I know it is hard to read but that is how it came out sorry.

Bye.

Gingerbread men

Hi bloggers
This is my post about my design of my gingerbread men.
The things I described is the Name,what it looks like,Hobby,Job,Feeling,And it's favourite things.

T4W8 pobble writing 2

Hi bloggers!
This is my second pobble writing.
It was about police searching for a robber.

T4W8 my weekend 2

Hi bloggers!
I have made another post about my weekend.
One of the things I did in the weekend was I went to mt cook.
I have a question for you. Have you ever been to mt cook?

Number 28

This week, Miss lee asked us to write a fabulous narrative based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the describing tools we have learnt. Like alliteration, adverbs,verbs, nouns and adjectives. Alliteration are 2 or 3 words in a row that start with the same letter. Adverbs describe verbs-and verbs are action words. Adjectives describe nouns and nouns are names.

I chose to write about this evil robot which is demolishing a city so it's about violence.

What do you rate my writing? Out of 10.

T4W2 Leon descriptive writing

Hi everyone
This is my descriptive writing.It has these word tools:Adverbs,Adjectives,Verbs,similes,alliteration,and metaphors.Can you notice some of the word tools I used?

How to stay awake all night

How to stay awake all night on Biteable.This is How to stay awake all night.

How to do the big butt boogie

This is how to do the big butt boogie.

Leon playground

This is Leon playground.

Persuasive writing 3

Persuasive writing

This is my persuasive writing the second.Do you think mr norman will say yes?

MY HOLIDAY

Edited version with more taps of the space bar

The trip

This is the story of my trip to turanga libriary.

My edited version:

My April holidays

T1W10 writing Leon

The lego world

I chose a picture from pobble and wtote a description about it but I'm not finished yet.

Character description

I tried to describe my descriptions by what they think,what they do,what they like.