I chose to write about this evil robot which is demolishing a city so it's about violence.
What do you rate my writing? Out of 10.
Thursday, November 21, 2019
Number 28
This week, Miss lee asked us to write a fabulous narrative based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the describing tools we have learnt. Like alliteration, adverbs,verbs, nouns and adjectives. Alliteration are 2 or 3 words in a row that start with the same letter. Adverbs describe verbs-and verbs are action words. Adjectives describe nouns and nouns are names.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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To: Leon,
ReplyDeleteI like that you put NUMBER 28 because I did it.
I also did NUMBER 28.
How about makeing the robot un-evil.
Have you seen a robot?
From: Sonny.