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I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, July 2, 2019
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
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Hi leon.
ReplyDeleteI like that you added who you sit with, what you played.
I remids me when i played a game called truth or dare.
Can you please add what you ate for lunch, who you sat with when you ate lunch.#
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HI LEON!!!!!.
ReplyDeleteI like that you added that the stuff we found BECAUSE it is use full some times.
I also remember doing that.
That was atchilly good.
Was that trip fun?.
FROM SONNY
hi Leon i like how you added details about the trip,
ReplyDeleteand i like how you also some details at the ochestra at the town hall,
i wish we got to play at the library and did not get to read the books,
also we explored the robots it was cool