The Ultimate Story Web

During reading time we read a story. Our group read a story called The Beast Of Moogil.
It was about Meep wanting Tim to fight the terrible beast.But the beast was just Tim's cat Rusty.
We had to write out the characters,setting,problem,outcome and action in the story. I found the activity pretty easy to do.

Read the actions section. How would you imagine it if it happened to you?

Number 28

This week, Miss lee asked us to write a fabulous narrative based on a pobble picture. We had to add all the describing tools we have learnt. Like alliteration, adverbs,verbs, nouns and adjectives. Alliteration are 2 or 3 words in a row that start with the same letter. Adverbs describe verbs-and verbs are action words. Adjectives describe nouns and nouns are names.

I chose to write about this evil robot which is demolishing a city so it's about violence.

What do you rate my writing? Out of 10.