This is my post about what I would feel like if I was Neil Armstrong when I first set foot on the moon.
I wrote it as a poem.
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
SLJ W1 D2 A2
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This is my post about what I would feel like if I was Neil Armstrong when I first set foot on the moon.
I wrote it as a poem.
This is my post about what I would feel like if I was Neil Armstrong when I first set foot on the moon.
I wrote it as a poem.
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Kia Ora Leon,
ReplyDeleteI like this poem about how you went to the moon it sounds very good
I like how you have add a lot of Describing words, I never thought of being the person to land on the moon.
Maybe next time you could use a different type of poem such as a Acrostic poem or something else.
Bye for now
Manuk :D
Kia ora Leon,
ReplyDeleteMe again! :)
What an awesome poem! I really like how you've made it rhyme. I always find writing rhyming poetry so tricky! So I'm very impressed. I like how you've included a quote as well. You're actually the first person I've come across who has done that - very original. :)
If you could, do you think you'd like to go to the moon?
Keep up the great blogging! I can't wait to read more posts from you soon.
Mā te wā,
Mikey