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Thursday, August 8, 2019

Why we should have tree huts on the roof where we can do quiet free time

4 comments:

  1. Well Leon, I'm so pleased you are thinking of interesting things to do...even if it is on the roof. How will you get up there? Will you use a ladder or learn to fly a helicopter?
    I can't wait to read your next post.
    From Gran.

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    1. Hi granny.
      Thanks for all the questions.I will edit my post and the next time you go on my blog you will see difference.

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  2. Hi Leon!, First of all I wanted to say your a pro at persuasive writing!! I like how you added what you can do in the tree house. Another thing that I liked was that you added why it's good to have fun. Next time you could try putting all this into one piece of writing!

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    Mya

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    1. Hi Mya.
      Thanks for saying that I'm a pro at persuasive writing.Well I am.
      But can you give me some tips of how I can put my work into one piece of writing because I don't even know how to do it!

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